과제인데요... 내용은 안 맞아도 문법적인 부분만 봐주시면 될 것 같아요.. 영어를 잘 목해서 공부하는
학생입니다... 부탁드러요 ..have met a lot of people in my life. they have been a great influence in my life. the most influential human is my grandfather. he had a big impact on my life.
he was sir priest. he runed a church that was very small . he liked to take care of flowerbeds. he worked in harmony with nature. he always planted flowers. there were many beautiful flowers and insects. i could see many butterflies in spring. i could see that buds was coming into bloom in summer. i could see many red dragonflies in fall. i could see that icicles hanged from tree branches in winter. i felt i was truly in heaven.
my mother and i were seriously affected. we likes to take care of flowerbeds due to my grandfather. i nursed the plant along for 10 years. there are about 100 flowerpots and flowers in porch. there are many trees. i growed organic vegetables in the garden , either. i regularly watered the pot. i rearranged pots. when i was a high school student , i decided to major in landscape architecture. because it is to make park and garden. i want to make parks for my grandfather.
he gived me dream of being a landscape architect. he kindly advised me to have fun being together. i regulate his conduct upon the maxim.
영작 잘하셨어요^^
몇가지만 말씀드리면요,
1. 중간중간 동사의 과거형이 잘못 쓰여졌어요.
(runed - ran, gived - gave, growed - grew
hanged는 목매달다란 뜻이고 여기선 hanging이 좋을 듯해요)
2. 문장 중간에 아마 강조의 의미인것같은데 이유를 알 수 없는 대문자가 나와요.
대문자는 문장 시작할 때와 고유명사등 사용이 제한되어 있어요.
따라서 문장중간에