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i’ll introduce you about kimchi stew. kimchi stew is spicy. but the soup really hits the spot. and kimchi stew color is red. so kimchi stew looks very delicious.
from now on i’ll teach you about how to make kimchi stew.
kimchi stew’s ingredients are kimchi, onion, green onion, pork, potato.
first, boil half pot of water.
second, cut up an onion into a quarter inch slices. and slice a green onion diagonally. cut potatoes and porks into 2inch pieces.
third, add salt and red pepper paste for the sauce and add kimchi ,onion, green onion, potato and pork into the pot. finally, cook it untill all ingredients are done.
kimchi stew is beneficial to the healthy of many people.
because pork into the kimchi stew is rich in protein and kimchi is rich in lactobacillus. so try it!