이거 학교 수행평가인데, 마땅히 부탁드릴 곳이없네요.ㅜ ㅜ
봐주시면 감사하겠습니다. ㅜㅜ
이게 영어 작문 수행인데 해외유학 찬반이랑, 남녀공학 찬반에 대해 글을 쓰는 겁니다 . 도움을 구할 분이 마땅치 않아서 염치없지만 이렇게 글을 올립니다. 혹시 문법오류를 봐주실 수 있다면 봐주세요.. ㅜㅜ 정말 죄송합니다 .
i think it’s good to study abroad. first, studying abroad helps children learn languages. since, we often speak english or the other languages in the other country, and we could face and speak foreign languages with foreigners .second, they will have opportunity to experience other country cultures.people who study abroad have a more diversified peer group than those who do not, so they can experience other country cultures more easily.last, studying abroad can provide excellent employment opportunities. company like to select people who study abroad rather than those who study in country because they are well in languages, and pay high-salaried to them. for these reasons, i agree with studying abroad. 이건 , 남녀공학제도 찬반입니다.
i think it’s good to wear school uniform. first, we don’t have to worry in front of a mirror every morning while choosing to wear. since, student want to look different from others, they spend lots of time while choosing clothes , and these cause lots of lateness to schools.second, no students will be made fun or be prejudiced by their clothes. if they wear plain clothes, some of them who can not afford to buy nice clothes would feel bad,finally, uniform has practical benefits when students are outside the school building. for example, on organised trips away from the school it is much easier for teachers to ensure they haven’t lost anyone and to monitor behaviour, than if students wore their own clothes. for these reasons, i0agree with wearing school uniform. 문법틀린부분 부탁드립니다 ㅜㅜ