학교 숙제 영작인데, 문법 틀린 것좀 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다.
이게 앞으로 혼자 살건지, 결혼을 해서 살건지 하는 거에 대한 자신의 견해 주장 3개 근거 3개로 작문하는 거랑, 교복을 입는 거에 대해 찬반을 하는 작문을 하는 건데, 도움을 구할 분이 마땅히 없어서 문법오류를 봐주실 수 있을 까해서 글을 올립니다.
i prefer to live alone for the following reasons.
first, i love the freedom in my life. when you are free, you could engage in hobbies, to improve my quality of living . for example, you could learn cooking, travel around the world, read books that you want.secondly, i want to spend all money that gained from my labor. if i marry, whether my husband’s personality is good or bad, spending money without consulting with my husband , is getting on my nerves. especially, i can not help reducing consumption of luxuries ,inevitably.finally, i prefer to work hard in my field rather than get married or raise children. today, getting married can be obstacles to work passionately because i have to consider my spouse’s schedule, family ceremony and so on. for these reasons, it is better to live alone rather than get married.
두번 째는 교복입는 거 찬반i think it’s good to wear school uniform. first, we don’t have to worry in front of a mirror every morning while choosing to wear. since, student want to look different from others, they spend lots of time while choosing clothes , and these cause lots of lateness to schools.second, no students will be made fun or be prejudiced by their clothes. if they wear plain clothes, some of them who can not afford to buy nice clothes would feel bad,finally, uniform has practical benefits when students are outside the school building. for example, on organised trips away from the school it is much easier for teachers to ensure they haven’t lost anyone and to monitor behaviour, than if students wore their own clothes. for these reasons, i agree with wearing school uniform. 정말 죄송하지만 봐주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다. ㅜㅜ