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school excursion

I went on a school excursion to tongyeong on October 15th.
The first day, we went to Haeinsa. I saw the Tripitaka Koreana in there. And we went to sacheon air and space museum. We saw the plane there.
The second day, We went to Geoje Concentration Camp and Mondol beach. And we saw a folk show of Angkor wat too. The folk show was exciting. And I could get more information about the war in Consentration Camp.
The last day, We looked around goseong dinosaur museum and Sangjogam National park. I saw the dinosaur footprints in the park behind the musuem.It was really fun.