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질문 내용 :

Ingyu had a breakfast.Then he went hiking at the top of the mountain and inhaled fresh and cool air.
Next, he had lunch with curry and rice, and he washed the dishes. Later, he had a skit contest. He had a lot of fun. After he had dinner with sing and dance. He had a great time.

에서 문법적으로 어색한 내용좀 집어서 고쳐주세요 ~!