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질문 내용 :
this was the moment about when i crossed the threshold between plane and connection tunnel at lax.
when our family got out from the plane, it was a nice sunny morning in la, but we were tired of the 10-hour flight from narita, japan.in immigration office, i saw there were many sections for interview the people who were going to enter the us.after the flight, we were all exhausted but we need to go to the immigration office for entering into the us.이 4 개의 문장인데요 도저히 문법적 오류 를 못잡아네겟네요ㅠㅠ 제가 문법을 못해서 일지도 있지만 하 막막하네요 ㅠㅠ 4개 문법적 오류 고쳐주시면 감사하겟구요 뭐가틀린지도 알려주시면 정말 감사할꺼같습니다 ㅠㅠ 도와주세요 ㅠㅠ